We have a lot of snow in Winnipeg, and a whiteout is when you could get snow blindness and see nothing but white. In every shot of Madison, there is too much white. It labours each shot, and the contrasting black bits, are poor attempts at breaking that awful monotony. Please do justice to Madison, by getting closer and putting more energy in each shot. She is a beautiful woman and deserves an artistic show. Bring her to the foreground and let the viewers be involved with each presentation by letting them see what that smile could mean in shot number 11.
Robert Hayes
We have a lot of snow in Winnipeg, and a whiteout is when you could get snow blindness and see nothing but white. In every shot of Madison, there is too much white. It labours each shot, and the contrasting black bits, are poor attempts at breaking that awful monotony. Please do justice to Madison, by getting closer and putting more energy in each shot. She is a beautiful woman and deserves an artistic show. Bring her to the foreground and let the viewers be involved with each presentation by letting them see what that smile could mean in shot number 11.