Mr. Preston I agree with Rick, you have failed to bring the best out of Kellie. For starters, your first shot has Kellie in a cistern of some kind battling to stabilize the pose outlined for her. Look at the right shoulder and her right hand. This is not an easy position, as her right hand and right foot are splayed out to steady herself. The stress on her upper body has caused her to limit her action or at least make it a safe posture. In the second shot Kellie’s head and hair are too much in the shade, and you should have had her looking down; notice the wrinkled brow. The third shot has too much rock or concrete, and the bronzing is a touch too much. In shot four you have exposed her too much for the position you have asked her to take. The light under her armpit should not be there. The rest of the shots either squash Kellie into a confined cave area, or you put Kellie into the background just too far back. Kellie is slim, solid and shapely, you could have done wonders with her hair had she been in the sunlight. I reckon it would have been nice to see a portrait.
RICK
A GORGEOUS YOUNG WOMAN, SHAME PHOTOS DON'T DO HER JUSTICE!
Robert Hayes
Mr. Preston I agree with Rick, you have failed to bring the best out of Kellie. For starters, your first shot has Kellie in a cistern of some kind battling to stabilize the pose outlined for her. Look at the right shoulder and her right hand. This is not an easy position, as her right hand and right foot are splayed out to steady herself. The stress on her upper body has caused her to limit her action or at least make it a safe posture. In the second shot Kellie’s head and hair are too much in the shade, and you should have had her looking down; notice the wrinkled brow. The third shot has too much rock or concrete, and the bronzing is a touch too much. In shot four you have exposed her too much for the position you have asked her to take. The light under her armpit should not be there. The rest of the shots either squash Kellie into a confined cave area, or you put Kellie into the background just too far back. Kellie is slim, solid and shapely, you could have done wonders with her hair had she been in the sunlight. I reckon it would have been nice to see a portrait.
pseuxipher
beautiful model